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Reading the Road Ahead
By fortunato364
30 March 2008
This was written partly to commemorate a friend passing her driving test.  The last line may have particular resonance for readers currently living in Swansea.

If you think your road is long and straight,
Or set in stone, or carved by fate,
You need more practice at the wheel
Your path to see, your way to feel.

The motorway may stretch before
Your polished windscreen, but no more
Does this your future journey know
Than tarot card or medium’s show.

For surely signs confuse sometimes
And from wrong exits new roads wind,
And lead to unimagined turns,
And roundabouts, and lessons learned.

And while you’re lost on some strange road,
A wild new landscape may unfold
Itself to old and jaded eyes,
Renew acquaintance with surprise.

Then sudden showers will block your view,
You’ll sit in snowdrifts, shivering, too,
And, broken down, you’ll find a phone,
And friends to aid your journey home.

You’ll read your maps from start to end,
Turn pages that you’d never bend
If all went well and roads were straight,
And set in stone, and carved by fate.

So never fear the long, straight way,
That seems to stretch to Judgement Day.
For this you can depend upon;
Roads never stay the same for long.


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The Road of Life
Written by Josie (2496 comments posted) 29th March 2008
Oh how true your poem is and how lovely. You think you are on a road and all ahead is clear, but something can happen and the road comes quickly to an end. Yes, been on that road too, but appreciate being back on the road again and at the wheel. Thanks for lovely words.

Written by fortunato364 (21 comments posted) 30th March 2008
Thanks Josie. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It is rather ironic that I chose to post this last night, as this morning my best laid plans have gone adrift due to forgetting the time change!

Written by Phil (6383 comments posted) 30th March 2008
Flowed very smoothly - some good ideas, well expressed. Liked it. 
 
Phil

Written by fellpony (1507 comments posted) 30th March 2008
like they say, it's a long road that has no corners! 
 
Nice repeat of the conceit set in stone, or carved by fate. A clever piece.

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