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By lauthiamkok
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30 March 2008 |
Hold on to me
for I only
live once until
you dream of me
hold me dear
once more.
2008.01.06, 1:03:21 am, Sun.
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Written by Fledermaus (3238 comments posted) 30th March 2008 | | It's a pity you had to break of the lines in such strange places to maintain the rhythm. The idea is nice, but that seems to interrupt the flow a bit. | Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 30th March 2008 | Something here I like - eed to think - will return. Phil |
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