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Hold me dear
By lauthiamkok
30 March 2008
Hold on to me
for I only
live once until
you dream of me
hold me dear
once more.

2008.01.06, 1:03:21 am, Sun.

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Written by Fledermaus (3238 comments posted) 30th March 2008
It's a pity you had to break of the lines in such strange places to maintain the rhythm. The idea is nice, but that seems to interrupt the flow a bit.

Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 30th March 2008
Something here I like - eed to think - will return. 
 
Phil

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