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Poetry
Seduction
By Fledermaus
30 March 2008
Laughing No zen this time 

Man, woman... It needs two, my dear.

And you will not ever have me,

I hoped to make that very clear.

 

For I am more than just a prey.

Oh, I do want to embrace you,

But there will not be more, OK?

 

Save your kisses for lesser men

For I am far too good for them

Seduce me? I don't think you can.

 

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Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 30th March 2008
Why do I get the suspicious feeling this is another 'Aife's cow' poem? It sounds like a poetic message Máel would have sent to Echaid's daughter. But the line "But there will not be more, OK?" throws me, since there never was anything between the two... hmmm... Very provocative. A challenge to a woman with sizable ego. 
 
Mia :roll

Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 30th March 2008
The 'lad' in me says: go ahead and have alittle fun while it's there - but I guess life is always a ittle more complicated than that. 
 
Phil

Written by Fledermaus (3487 comments posted) 30th March 2008
Thanks Mia and Phil. 
I do know it seems to be very suitable for that story about Máel, but this isn't about that.  
Phil may have guessed in the right direction: I guess that I'm perhaps very complicated where it concerns girls.

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