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Patience
By Rattle_Spear
29 October 2005
Dedicated to love and respect

My trust and respect was never for sale,
I should have told you in our first mail.
Trust and respect is like a good red wine
It matures and ripens with time!
Some get to drink the fruits of their toil,
Others like you will only spoil.
My trust and respect in a single fling,
When you look back you've lost everything!
Now be a good Las and be on your way,
With another boys heart this very fine day.
I tried to direct you needless to say,
My trust you had to betray.
Good luck to you and all of your friends;
I am sure you will find true love;
Through life's bends!
Just bear in mind that patience is a virtue,
Not controlled by your friends or you!

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