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Undercurrents of Despair
By Sir_Nigel
02 April 2008
I’m not sure if I should post on here, I’ve nothing much to say,
My wife hasn’t left me, no-one has died, it’s a warm and a cloudless day.

Others seem so sad and blue, their lives so stark and sober.
They speak of sadness, pain, regret and wet days in October.
 
I need to look inside myself and dig up deep emotions.
Something glum to wallow in, with philosophic notions. 

I need to find profundity and air my thoughts on grief
And expound my wilder theories on kismet and belief 
 
Perhaps I’ll add some pathos to my weighty composition
And then to hammer home my point: Repetition, Repetition, Repetition.

And as I write of woe and gloom I’ll find the process healing
(A better way than drinking gin and staring at the ceiling) 

So here I go: ‘I’m all alone, not found that certain someone.
The world is doomed and warming fast (I really am the glum one)’ 

I write of love and loneliness and problems in the Arctic
And to get those feelings off my chest is really quite cathartic.

So damn those sunny attitudes, don’t take it on the chin. 
If I see a Slough of Despond now, I’ll throw myself right in.

  

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Written by Veronica_Milvus (591 comments posted) 2nd April 2008
ooohhh 
 
*pats Sir Nigel's head* I hope that was tongue in cheek. 
 
Some good rhyming in here - I enjoyed Arctic and cathartic! 
 
Coyuld you do a "Reasons to be Cheerful" poem to make yourself feel better?

Written by Sir_Nigel (37 comments posted) 2nd April 2008
Don't worry, I'm fine. It's meant to be ironic.

Written by Josie (2718 comments posted) 4th April 2008
Well you've come to the right place to pour out your sadness and frustration I think. Put it into a poem - always.

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