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By NedWilson
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03 April 2008 |
I have some poems written while suffering from various diseases.
This one is from my Bronchitis series. I was waiting for the rain to stay
On a dreary day in May
When I saw a man
Fall over a can
Which (as I was a first-aider) brightened up my day!|
Written by Phil (6387 comments posted) 3rd April 2008 | Also - always good to see others suffer the odd prat fall when you're feeling dicky.
Phil | he hee
Written by fellpony (1507 comments posted) 3rd April 2008 | I think it would stand (excuse the pun) to lose the bit in brackets. Why not just honestly rejoice in someone else's downfall? 
As I have a sniffle myself right now, I am tickled by the idea of "The Bronchitis Series". Come on, post the rest! |
Written by NedWilson (26 comments posted) 3rd April 2008 | | Thanks guys. I feel better already! |
Written by Phil (6387 comments posted) 3rd April 2008 | | FP's right though. A series would be good. | schadenfreude strikes
Written by patterjack (1060 comments posted) 3rd April 2008 | 
The last line in this limerick style is a bit like that of the young man from Japan who said I try to fit as many words into the last line as I possibly can
patterjack |
Written by mia_ms_kim (891 comments posted) 3rd April 2008 | What a fun piece! I'm laughing. I've been suffering from bad coughs for the past two weeks (till I thought I fractured my ribs), and I felt comforted when I heard other people coughing, and complaining about their entire family being afflicted with the flu. I don't want to suffer alone.
Mia  |
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