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Aussie Beasts
Written by fellpony
04 April 2008
Aussie animals and plants have wonderful names. Here's a guessing poem. What ARE all these things?


We are Betcherrigah. Yellow and green we are.
Flocks in the trees we are, you know us well.
We’ll copy anything, whether you laugh or sing.
What Aussie beast are we – can you tell?

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I am the Lillipilli, gentle and shy,
I don’t make a fuss, and I never ask why.
My head is fluffy and I hold it high –
I’m an Australian, but what am I?

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I am the Kookaburra, I eat snakes.
I don’t like trifle and I don’t like cakes.
With my sharp nose and my laughing cry,
what kind of Australian beast am I?

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He is the Boggi, scaly and rough.
He'll flash his tongue to show he's tough.
Don’t pick him up, he'll bite and hiss!
What kind of Aussie beast is this?

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She is the Kangaroo, rusty and red.
She has a pocket for her baby’s bed.
She can jump on enormous feet –
She's the boundingest Aussie beast you’ll meet.


Reviews
lol
Written by patterjack (1314 comments posted) 3rd April 2008
There are books of rhymes for children about Oz beasties . My lot particularly loved one that told that a  
Wallaby from Wagga went cricketing at Hay  
and of 
A snake from Uranquinty who felt a trifle groggy bewailing the fact that  
My eyes have gone quite squinty since I swallowed that last froggy  
 
Nostalgia ! We lived at Wagga , near Uranquinty . 
 
Want to turn your hand to quokkas and quolls etc ? -- I could bore you witless with more and more names -- but I will spare you . 
 
patterjack

Written by mia_ms_kim (1054 comments posted) 3rd April 2008
I didn't know children's poems could be so challenging. Very enjoyable. I could only come up with, parrots for stanza 1, and blue tongue for stanza 4. And they are only vague guesses.  
 
Mia :roll
blue tongue lizard
Written by fellpony (1646 comments posted) 3rd April 2008
is absolutely right for stanza 4, well done! NEARLY right for stanza 1 - think smaller birds though, and in domesticity, of any colour from green, yellow, white and blue. Did you know that the boggi lizard lent its name to the handpiece of electric sheep shears? 
 
Brian - you'll have to send me a list of names; I particularly like the long ones, with repetitive syllable patterns (this could get addictive).

Written by WeeAnn (35 comments posted) 3rd April 2008
I love it! The Betcherrigah, if you say it out loud is almost a givaway! 
Ann

Written by mia_ms_kim (1054 comments posted) 4th April 2008
I cheated. After Ann's hint, I looked up Betcherrigah. Is it Budgerigar? The common budgie? If so, I will be so disappointed. I was thinking of some exotic birds!  
 
And I didn't know blue tongue inspired the name of electric sheep shears, fellpony. (I have a blue tongue family living in my backyard, under a big rock. I think they lived there long before we got here. Recently a water dragon joined them, he swims in the pool. They have a far better life than us.) 
 
Mia 8)
Correct
Written by fellpony (1646 comments posted) 4th April 2008
Stanza 1 is indeed our favourite oosaprettyboythen. "Boggi" for electric sheep shears is probably local to sheep rearing areas of Oz - the name coming from the shape of the handpiece, being similar to the shape of the lizard!  
 

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