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Poetry
Challenger
By owlhoot
05 April 2008
My wife and I lived in South Florida at the time of the Challenger space shuttle tragedy. Though we were ~90 miles south, we were able to witness the explosion. This poem, written that year summarized my feelings at the time.

One lone cloud captured every eye
and silenced cheerful laughter.
Death was a cloud in a clear blue sky...
a pictorial sermon the moment after.

Seven sparks of life blew out in a burst of fire and smoke
leaving behind a serpentine cloud twisting there with ease.
A dream dissipated in the breeze
from which no one awoke.

Could it be said that they died in vain
or that their bravery saw them through?
Was their hope for greater gain
a goal worth reaching to?
Is bravery like paying the greatest cost
not knowing if they would owe the bill
Yet knowing from the start they could be lost?
Is bravery just an act of will?

Perhaps their boldest act of all
was where all men could see
as Challenger issued her final call
and challenged man with his mortality.

Seven sparks of life blew out in a burst of fire and smoke
leaving behind a serpentine cloud twisting there with ease.
A dream dissipated in the breeze
from which no one awoke.


Reviews

Written by Steve_K (57 comments posted) 5th April 2008
Beautiful and touching poem. Great work. Especially like the mixed rhyme

Written by Veronica_Milvus (749 comments posted) 6th April 2008
This was lovely, and solemn too. I loved the first stanza with "death was a cloud in a clear blue sky" and also the way you ponder in the middle section everything that was said about those deaths and whether it could be made to have any sense.
hi
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 6th April 2008
owlhoot, a sad, good write . 
Bernie

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