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| red lightning at the pinnacle of sound | |
| By alister | ||||||||
| 05 April 2008 | ||||||||
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hi there. this is a piece i'm putting in to a local poetry zine soon. i think it's pretty much finished. the second section feels a lot like it still needs more work though. let me know your thoughts and enjoy. I out the huge dark mass, tumbling over itself in a field, a form rises high up but cuts down sharp back into the black. it looms and promises it's just as bad as you think it is. it's as bad as you think. it's hard to tell where it starts or ends but it is there. it is there and never moving. there and black. hunched and never moving. II beneath a stone bridge, after a long, slow night, he parked his car, under orange streetlamp light. he squeezed my tanned knee and asked "can i have it?" he looked at me and asked if he could have it. shy, as i was, i looked over tenderly. ready, as i was, that look was the end of me. III young, sensitive body parts; an infinite tide of sexy body blows. the girl coalesced. ejaculation, femoral intercourse and mass. fuck. red sound radical, fuck is wonderful. IV roots and bark and green and brown rich full soil and wet wet ground tender twigs and living leaves sun in slits shines through thick trees stuff hides up in the branches stuff makes noise in the branches where the girl was found under the dirt mound
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