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By SierraLeone
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06 April 2008 |
I remember a week in bed with a criminal,
The one that broke in and stole my heart.
The way she looks at me burns. Arson?
Kissing her evaporates any thoughts. Abduction?
I remember a week in bed with a criminal,
The one that kidnapped my little bit of sense.
It never going anywhere further. Deception?
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Written by Steve_K (55 comments posted) 5th April 2008 | Interesting theme, assuming you didn't sleep with a criminal who broke in and then proceeded to steal your heart  Only kidding, nice poem. I especially liked the line:
"Kissing her evaporates any thoughts" Nice write |
Written by owlhoot (17 comments posted) 6th April 2008 | | Keep her locked away in your heart forever. Justice served. | Hi SL
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 6th April 2008 | a nice, clever write.
Bernie |
Written by mia_ms_kim (1019 comments posted) 6th April 2008 | Love the questions. Arson? Abduction? Deception? Provocative.
Mia  |
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