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The Village School
By Robru
06 April 2008


 Many a story has been told of the 'Old Bush School" in Australia. I refer to this one as the village school. The village and the school both still exist; it's just that the school is now derelect. The children are taken by bus to the school in a small town about 30km away.



                        Our fathers built the village school
                              Those nights they went home weary,
                        The village helped paint the rooms
                              With colors that were cheery.

                        The village school is empty now,
                              But I recall it oh so well,
                        When this place was full of kids,
                              Who answered teachers bell.

                        We went to school in twos and threes,
                              Some laughing and some talking.
                        The lucky ones on horseback,
                              With most of us just walking.

                        We played all sorts of funny games,
                              While we wait for school to start,
                        And when the teacher rang the bell
                              Our playtime did depart.

                        We sat at desks with heads bent down,
                              We learned all our A B C.
                        With reading-writing and 'rithmetic,
                              And some geometry.

                        We closed the day,tired and worn,
                              Then made our own way home,
                        To do odd jobs around the place,
                              With just the token moan.

                        Tomorrow will be another day.
                              There'll be many a happy yell,
                          As we make our way back to school
                              While listening for teachers bell.

                        Now that I've grown much older
                              I often sit and wonder why
                        I can't relive those carefree days
                              I enjoyed in years gone by.
 
                        Our fathers built the village school
                              Those nights they went home weary,
                        The village helped paint the rooms
                              With colors that were cheery.

                        The village school is empty now,
                              But I recall it oh so well,
                        When this place was full of kids,
                              Who answered teachers bell.

                        We went to school in twos and threes,
                              Some laughing and some talking.
                        The lucky ones on horseback,
                              With most of us just walking.

                        We played all sorts of funny games,
                              While we wait for school to start,
                        And when the teacher rang the bell
                              Our playtime did depart.

                        We sat at desks with heads bent down,
                              We learned all our A B C.
                        With reading-writing and 'rithmetic,
                              And some geometry.

                        We closed the day,tired and worn,
                              Then made our own way home,
                        To do odd jobs around the place,
                              With just the token moan.

                        Tomorrow will be another day.
                              There'll be many a happy yell,
                          As we make our way back to school
                              While listening for teachers bell.

                        Now that I've grown much older
                              I often sit and wonder why
                        I can't relive those carefree days
                              I enjoyed in years gone by.
 

Reviews

Written by owlhoot (17 comments posted) 6th April 2008
Nice poem, very nostalgic. I wonder though if a cut and paste error caused you to repeat the entire poem or if it was intentional?
Hi
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 6th April 2008
Robru, I liked this one, a good write. 
Bernie

Written by mia_ms_kim (974 comments posted) 6th April 2008
I learn so much about the bush life from your poems. I learnt precious little from classrooms in school. It's like seeing modern oz history, which cannot be told without the outback bush life. I'm beginning to appreciate poetry which informs as well as reveals. Really lovely. Did kids really ride to school on horses in the bush? Was it equivalent to today's wealthy families giving their kids a ride to school in mercedes etc? 
 
Mia :)

Written by Robru (204 comments posted) 8th April 2008
To Owlhoot firstly;- It is a copy paste error. Thank you for pointing it out to me. I'm in the process of packing and moving and time on the computer is strictly limited. Forgive my errors please. 
 
To maiprenai, I thank you for you encouragement. 
 
To Mia, Yes, those lucky kids did go to school on horseback. There would be a dozen or so horses tied up with nosebags of feed and a trough of water to drink. It was normal. I was a walker, it was only about a mile from home to school. Guess it was much the same as todays kids using the bus or being driven in the Mercedes. The Aussie poets; Henry Lawson, Banjo Patterson, Adam Lindsay gordon etc give a good account of life as it used to be. "The Loaded Dog" is one of the best of Henry Lawson's short stories. The present day bush has the garden variety cars in place of horses but much of the old lifestyle still exists in out of the way places. I love the quiet peaceful lifestyle that goes with it all.
Robru
Written by fellpony (1580 comments posted) 8th April 2008
Much of this was like the rural schools here in Cumbria. Kids sometimes rode to school on ponies if the school was a long way from home. Some were given a lift on the family's trap while Dad took milk to be collected. I know of one chap who was thrown out of the trap along with his 6 brothers and sisters when a wheel collapsed! Then they all had to walk - and carry the milk cans.

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