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Brian's birthday
Written by fellpony
06 April 2008
Veronica wrote:
so we might see what he has seen

And I bethought me of the acrostic ....


 

Papyrus and parchment, paper and presses,
alliteration in attractive dresses,
tripping the light fantastic on the page,
treating as siblings comedy and rage,
emulating Pope’s Augustan maledictions,
rhyming carved firm as runes and rock inscriptions.
Jumping through hoops of meaning to infold
astonishing verbal gems within his gold,
capturing hearts and minds with classic tales –
keeping the wind of poetry in his sails.

Reviews

Written by Brett (782 comments posted) 6th April 2008
Very nice, Sue. I like your rhyming of maledictions with inscriptions. 'Keeping the wind of poetry in his sails' - who would not appreciate that tribute. 
 
Happy birthday patterjack. 
 
Cheers.

Written by beatricelouise (215 comments posted) 6th April 2008
I agree with Brett, fellpony. All the rhyming was great and that line mentioned above is my favourite. Great job! 
 
Happy Birthday, patterjack. 
 
:) :grin

Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 6th April 2008
Happy birthday, patterjack. 
 
Liked the poem, Sue. I could add - but it would ruin your acrostic - he's kept the poetic wind in my sails oft times too. 
 
Phil
A beautiful mind
Written by mia_ms_kim (1017 comments posted) 6th April 2008
What a joy it must be to have poems dedicated to you, patterjack, on your birthday. I feel fellpony and Veronica's poems captured something of your person and your work. I felt like writing a poem myself, entitled 'A beautiful mind' to honour you on your birthday, but I dare not afflict you or the GW friends. After reading your work on GW for two months, I thought 'what a beautiful mind this man has, what a beautiful mind.' And what a gift you are to many people. 
 
Happy birthday, Brian. 
 
Mia ;)

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