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Poetry
foxt
By JWallendas
07 April 2008
sniffle snuffle look out im a fox

them lovely little foxes
snaking and jumping
ducking and diving
arnt they beuatifull

i walk out side of my front door
and they've crapped on my path
like a booby trap
foxt

look they have cubs
we can watch for ages
as they play in the
morning dew its nice

that night i got 3
hours sleep
cos the little bastards were
having a screaching competition

they can jump as high as a fence
and yet stay unseen and unheard
for the whole day through
where do they go

but they come out
when you least expect it
and rip your bin bags to shit
leaving you with last weeks
rubbish to pick up
which can almost walk itself to the fresh liner
t i dont know

Reviews

Written by punchy (372 comments posted) 7th April 2008
Jwallendas, I know who you are :eek  
Be afraid,be very afraid :upset

Written by Josie (2496 comments posted) 7th April 2008
I have to admit that your poem has foxt me, there is no doubt, by the time I have struggled through sentences that have no capitals at the beginning or full stops at the end, no apostrophes or anything else. ha ha. Foxt is exactly the right word. As for punchy - she's got you sussed and no mistake! So look out. I shall have to direct you to the children's section to read about Mr Can't Be Bothered and Mr Couldn't Care Less. They'll sort you out.

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