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By lauthiamkok
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07 April 2008 |
A haiku? Perhaps not...
Time will pass, colours will fade
on each stranger's skin, two distant places
the breeze touches us the same.
31.12.2006, 3:39 pm, Sun. |
Written by Josie (2732 comments posted) 7th April 2008 | | Yes, but the breeze doesn;t touch everyone the same. Some burn and others, like myself, remain untouched. Aren't haikus: 5,7,5 syllables per line? |
Written by mia_ms_kim (973 comments posted) 7th April 2008 | You sound like Shiva Ryu here, Lau, except that he probably would use more concrete images and convey more concrete concepts. I like the image of the breeze that somehow makes us all human and connnects us.
Mia  |
Written by lauthiamkok (60 comments posted) 7th April 2008 | thank you Mia, that is what I try to use breeze as a metaphor. We 'feel' and 'hurt' the same, I think - that is no scientific evidence yet so far... humans somehow remain mysterious.
Lau
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