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I dwell in possibilities
By lauthiamkok
07 April 2008
Another strange writing of mine...any grammar mistakes please do let me know many thanks:-)

I dwell in possibilities
only by death, if you
come to visit and ask
then I will whisper
my grave will tell.

30.12.2006, 2:17 am, Sat.

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Written by Josie (2845 comments posted) 7th April 2008
Yes, I am afraid that it is very strange. Can you explain it in simple English for stupid me? If it will enlighten you in any way: it is by death that you may find life, just as in our bluebell woods you will see new life come from within the dead woodland leaves. That should help you to understand.

Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 7th April 2008
So open to interpretation. I can see why Josie finds it strange. It is. But I see what you mean by post-modern. No rules. No boundary. This "author" is now speaking from the grave! 
 
Mia :grin

Written by lauthiamkok (60 comments posted) 7th April 2008
"No rules. No boundary." thank you for the interpretation, I just dont know to use proper english words sometimes really... 
 
:-)

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