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By lauthiamkok
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08 April 2008 |
another theory if love...? any grammar flaws please do let me know :-)
Do not say I don't love you anymore
Just I have grown up and growing old
And the love that was born for you
Too has grown up and growing old
In the ripe happiness with another face
Which will never be you again. |
Written by mia_ms_kim (890 comments posted) 8th April 2008 | Hmmm... Your poems seem to centre on the process of aging and the maturing of love, Lau. Very intriguing, like all your poems are.
Mia  |
Written by lauthiamkok (60 comments posted) 8th April 2008 | Yes they are the centre of my writing so far just like Aristotle concentrates on tragedy in Poetics.
Lau :-) |
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