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By punchy
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08 April 2008 |
Salty saline, adjacent to whine
Lacrimal glands they exude
Membranes are cleared, emotions released
An alternate state will conclude
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Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 8th April 2008 | | ? salty saline? |
Written by audrie (451 comments posted) 8th April 2008 | What else could saline be but salty? To answer Maipenrai!
I liked this. | TA
Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 8th April 2008 | I checked out tears in my dictionary and it said- Salty saline solution and it inspired me to write this poem , honest gov!
Much like sweet sugar or wet water, mind you that last example is a bit shit! |
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 8th April 2008 | | that was my point, saline is salt |
Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 9th April 2008 | Allright, no need to nit pick, tis only my little poem and if salty saline solution is good enough for a dictionary then tis good enough for my poem! nuf said  |
Written by JWallendas (5 comments posted) 9th April 2008 | bit short. grammar
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Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 9th April 2008 | | Oh go away now MR JWallendas, don't you have a job to go to? |
Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 9th April 2008 | | Ha ha - Well, you have certainly got them here Punchy. I'm not sure that I quite understand either. What is the adjacent to whine? Is this something to do with your dog? No. It must be a puzzle. More likely that I am just thick though. |
Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 9th April 2008 | This is my crying poem. Salty saline was the dictionary description of tears and alongside is the "whine" that unbearable sound that comes out of my childrens mouths together with the tears. Lacriminal glands are where the tears come from literally and the scientific purpose for this is to clean the membranes on the surface of the eyes. Once the tears are shed we all feel better and happier!
I hope that makes sense, if not just nod politely  |
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