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By martcoops
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08 April 2008 |
Holy crud, this is just terrible. Please comment and let me know if you think I should extend this into a three hour long feature film... I can't be bothered to write any more lines, so I'll just get the actors to speak really slowly... but to compensate for that, I'll get them to move really quickly! Anyway, read it and weep. (And weep you shall!)
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Doctor... How is he?
Joseph: So doctor... How is he?
Doctor: Stable.
Joseph: Oh, thank goodness.
Doctor: What?
Joseph: I'm so happy.
Doctor: Why?
Joseph: Because he's stable.
Doctor: Oh, I'm sorry... did you say HOW is he? I thought you said WHERE is he.
Joseph: But you said he was stable.
Doctor: No... I meant he's in a stable.
Joseph: He's in a stable? Why?
Doctor: He's dead and the morgue is full.
Joseph: Oh dear God... This is awful.
Doctor: I know. But we're trying to get it sorted.
Joseph: Well, I don't think you'll be able to bring him back to life will you?
Doctor: Oh I'm sorry... I was talking about the morgue situation.
Joseph: You're the worst doctor ever.
Doctor: Yeah.
THE END.
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Ouch
Written by criz (28 comments posted) 9th April 2008 | | Sometimes I think people intentionally put something bad out there to see how many of us can try to write some uplifting comment about it. Well, I will not take the bait. This was, as your own analysis conveys, pretty bad. I am actually weeping in pain as write this. |
Written by Phil (6393 comments posted) 11th April 2008 | Uplifting comment? Not from me. A nothing piece. Sorry.
Phil |
Written by Octavius (24 comments posted) 11th April 2008 | | I think... to be positive, there's potential here for a short, Python-esque sketch. As it is, though, this is just too light-weight and lacking in purpose. It's not a joke, a skit, a sketch or a story. | Holy crud, this is just terrible.
Written by wltshr (300 comments posted) 24th April 2008 | Why?
Wltshr |
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