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By Veronica_Milvus
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10 April 2008 |
Taking up Josie's challenge. So much depends
upon
a green light
blinking
in my room
broadband
to link me to
poets
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Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 11th April 2008 | | nice. Made me laugh. :D I'm sure Josie'll like this. :'D |
Written by Josie (2780 comments posted) 11th April 2008 | | Yes, I really do. I have just had four years of not being able to walk because of neglect by my doctor. Eventually, with the help of an osteopath, the simple thing which caused this dreadful thing to happen was put right. (It was just dropped arches in the first place which wasn't diagnosed). How I have depended on the friendship of the people on Great Writing during this awful time. The little green light - yes Veronica, your poem says it all for me. 10/10 |
Written by Josie (2780 comments posted) 11th April 2008 | | Yes, I really do. I have just had four years of not being able to walk because of neglect by my doctor. Eventually, with the help of an osteopath, the simple thing which caused this dreadful thing to happen was put right. (It was just dropped arches in the first place which wasn't diagnosed). How I have depended on the friendship of the people on Great Writing during this awful time. The little green light - yes Veronica, your poem says it all for me. 10/10 | Oh dear
Written by Josie (2780 comments posted) 11th April 2008 | | You can see that I really meant it Veronica as you've been told twice over. ha ha - The children would say that it was my naughty invisible friend called "Mickledy-Me" who always plays tricks on me. |
Written by Merioneth (79 comments posted) 15th April 2008 | Haha. Poets can be chickens!
Is the same true in reverse? Can chickens be poets? | not specially happy with this one
Written by patterjack (1179 comments posted) 30th June 2008 | I think it's a bit too contrived .
patterjack |
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