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| Waiting to depart | |
| By martcoops | ||||
| 10 April 2008 | ||||
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A poem about the greatest friendship of all Waiting to depart brings the usual rush With mother conducting the band My father is perched on the edge of his chair The car keys clutched in his hand The bags are all waiting there, by the front door With labels for each of the clan You'd think we were flying to fight in the Gulf Not going to visit my gran Mother is shouting for somebody, please PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE OF GOOD GOD Could somebody please just nip out to the yard And take a quick check on the dog She always gets like this before we set off It's a wonder she hasn't dropped dead Dad just takes it and closes his eyes While she stands there pecking his head I think the best thing is to check on the dog Old Zacky stays out of the fray He's always aware of the mood that she's in He avoids her, keeps out of her way It's awfully quiet in the garden Which isn't like Zack at all He's usually chewing on something Or running about with his ball I look down the guinnel that's next to our house And the fears that I had were bang on The gate which is meant to keep dogs in Was open, and Zacky was gone. I had to tell mum I was going to look She tore out a clump of her hair i asked my brother to help me But he quite clearly just didn't care So I slinked off into the darkness Looking for that bloody thing Thinking that knowing my doggy He's probably run up to the Kings They own a farm at the top of the road And he likes to round up their sheep Old farmer King has threatened to shoot But it's a promise he's yet failed to keep I whistled and shouted and called out his name Knowing that he wouldn't come He'd be too busy chasing a cat Or biting the fleas on his bum Further up the road I saw Some people were stood in the road I thought at first that someone broke down And the car was going to be toed I got closer and saw a few people One of them hugging a man She was crying uncontrollably Standing there next to her van "I just didn't see him," she sobbed to the others They told her she wasn't to blame I saw on the ground in front of her feet Lying there cold in the rain I couldn't catch my breath at first My best friend was dead in the street He'd only wanted to have some fun And chase after a couple of sheep I kneeled on the tarmac beside him And put my hand on his wet fur His eyes were still open just staring ahead I knew he was no longer there. He looked so beautiful lying there still His body was sodden but strong A droplet of crimson fell from his nose The only sign of anything wrong And I cried and I cried as i hugged by best friend And at home mother still cursed his name They were waiting to depart But Zacky had gone in the rain.
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