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Josie's Challenge
By Sir_Nigel
11 April 2008

So much depends

on this.

I must get

it right

or they’ll think,

I’m a

flash in the pan

or crap

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A change needed here
Written by Josie (2780 comments posted) 11th April 2008
They will think 
 
I am 
 
Quite smart with words - 
 
Quite true. 
 
 
 
Try changing the last few lines. Really good try.

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