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Josie's challenge?
By punchy
11 April 2008
A bit late , been busy and not quite sure of the task but is this correct?



So much depends
Upon
My eye sight
It is
Failing,so
Hard now
To read the lines
Unclear 

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Written by Josie (2788 comments posted) 11th April 2008
Well done Punchy! Top marks. You must go and get your eyes tested. Look after your eyesight. It is so precious. I hope you enjoyed doing this.

Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 11th April 2008
Thankyou Josie. You really should'nt take me so literally, I have 20 /20 vision, no imparement at all , just an idea for a poem. 8)  
Ps. I am grateful for my good eye sight.

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