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Non-Fiction
Spring - Vernal Awakening
By sahewitt
12 April 2008
A look at spring's rebirth. Spring installment to my Seasons series

The burgeoning trees serve to fatten the lazy bees that drift dreamily around the newly warmed back porch. Spring has arrived in all its vernal glory. Redbuds bloom about the encircling woods as do the forsythia. The sleepy dogwoods have only just begun but soon they too will join the rush to burgeon. I eagerly anticipate the pale greening of the long quiescent trees. Too long, have they been in hibernation. It is time now to rise up and rejoin the land of the living.

 

The woods warm with the rising temperatures, leaving the back porch warmed as well. Now is the time for the insects to awaken and explore. Newly roused these bees seem to study their environs as if for the first time. Buzzing about the porch, along with the fat bluebottles, they seem enthralled with any new contact or experience, no matter how incidental or insignificant. Such is the life of insects. Life is short; experience and understanding are shorter still.

 

The lack of consequence seems not to matter to these lesser beings. Perhaps there is a lesson in this for us: the larger, sentient beings, some inner, deeper call to abandon our more prosaic endeavors and seek something a little more life affirming; or perhaps it is only my drifting thoughts and musings on this glorious spring day.


 
As the poet put it: April comes like an idiot, babbling and strewing flowers.
(Edna
St. Vincent Millay). This seems to capture the mood perfectly: babbling, indeed. The flowers seem to be doing a strewing all their own. Along the roadsides, clumps of daffodils adorn the leaf-strewn gullies, providing a much-needed early glimpse of spring. April, for her part, need only supply the showers; the flowers will take care of themselves. 

As for us, we can only hope for an equally vibrant rebirth, be it one of mind or spirit. This is the time of year each of us should aspire to new beginnings, new ideas and, yes, new hope. This is a sentiment much bandied about this election season. Let us hope for leadership that aspires as we do: a hope for less violence, a hope for greater brotherhood, a hope for less of the bickering that forestalls us and leads us all astray, a hope for unity of purpose not the divisive partisanship the pushes us further apart. 

We can but hope for all of these in our season of rebirth and reawakening, pray our elected leadership will hope for the same. This may just be all folderol; perhaps a little foolishness is in order. After all, ‘tis the season!

© Stephen Alexander 2008 

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Written by mia_ms_kim (891 comments posted) 11th April 2008
Ahhh.... What a lovely musing as Spring comes knocking on your door... I liked much of what you wrote here, Stephen, your thoughts on what the insects teach us, the quote on April coming like an idiot, and especially the reference to rebirth, new beginning etc. Spring is a season of new hope, isn't it? Although we are moving into autumn over here in oz, I feel like it's Spring season in my life after reading your piece, and I feel a new spring in my steps and in my heart. (sounds corny but I mean it.)  
 
I guess over there, you feel some trepidation about the looming election. We in oz went through all that, and got ourselves a new PM! Yeh!!!!! I LOVE our new PM, Kevin Rudd. I prayed for him, voted for him, and now so proud of him!!! Yeh!!! 
 
Thank you for a lovely read. It's get colder and colder here in Sydney. 
 
Mia 8)

Written by Phil (6393 comments posted) 12th April 2008
Some nice descriptions - you really gave the impression of life beginning to explode.  
 
As for leadership/politics - I struggle to think that any government will be any more balanced than the one that went before. I wonder how long Kevin Rudd will be your darling, Mia. Long may it last. However, I remember Tony Blair starting off as a youngish PM. I didn't support all his policies - but it was exciting to have a fresh face that was different to the corrupt (morally and literally) lot that went before. In the years that followed he led the UK into an illegal war we can't seem to walk away from. 
Phil

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