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saturday afternoon
By wt
12 April 2008
Love me joy to see the rain
On your lips in touched refrain
For all the swelling in my pants
I can’t think twice while your rear pants

Of all the times that we’ve been true
I know that place you love me to
Touch so ever sensual
To flow your sweetest wine’s ado

On bed or breakfast twice and more
Lunch after brunch and then amore
I toast your welcoming embrace
Your lips upon my (    ) I place

Forgive for I do stoop so low
Your wines trajectory that flows
I must and do oblige to such
Poetic pop inside I blush

And if my sharing daring muse
Too much in truth I have abused
True love for me I must admit
Has nothing there to do with guilt

So turn let's praise once more and for
That chance to fly out through the door
Tomorrow's back I will have been
And thank you much for back's soft skin
 

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