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Delilah's Reply to Judges 13
By dylangrrl
09 November 2005

The footnotes are a little less awkward on the printed page....


Delilah's Reply to Judges 13[1]
 
Were you dedicating yourself
to the God of Israel
when you parted these
creamy-coffee thighs?
 
Did you wait eagerly
to tell the Son of David
that a shiksa[2] stole you
from your precious deity?
 
Why is it, Samson,
that you ripped apart a lion
with your bare hands but
couldn't keep your secret from a woman?
 
Maybe because they honey
that dripped from that lion's
carcass wasn't half
as sweet as
mine.


[1]Roughly, Samson was born dedicated to God. God gave me special powers of strength, the source of which was his long flowing hair. In Samson's youth he ripped a lion in half and returned a few days later to find the body filled with honey. This event was interpreted as a sign from God. Those against the Jews hired Delilah to find the source of Samson's power. He eventually told her it was his hair. This act lead to his capture, blinding, and imprisonment. Eventually he hailed victorious against his captors.
 

[2]a non-Jewish woman

Reviews

Written by pixyfire (6 comments posted) 9th November 2005
I really enjoyed this poem, I'm familiar with the story of Samson and Delilah and it provides an interesting viewpoint I hadn't considered before. The line "couldn't keep your secret from a woman" is good and I think it could be even more provocative if it sounded more like an action than a consequence, so that it would fit more similarly with the previous line such as "but yielded a woman to seize Jehovah's secret from your lips?" I like the sarcasm in the poem.

Written by amboline (183 comments posted) 10th November 2005
I really like this... my only critical comment is that Samson pre-dated King David, so the line "to tell the Son of David" wouldn't have meant anything in Delilah's day. Apart from that, very good - very cutting - and the ending is fantastic. It reminds me of some of the stuff in "The World's Wife" by Carol Ann Duffy (my favourite contemporary poet by a mile :) ). Good on you!

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