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Love - (Josie's Challenge) |
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By Bonbon
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14 April 2008 |
I am trying Josie's challenge. I think that love is the important thing in this world. If we showed each other more love, the world would be a happier place.
So much depends
upon
all of us
loving
all others
as God taught us
to do.
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Written by Josie (2536 comments posted) 15th April 2008 | | Actually I think the point that you have made in this poem is probably one of the most important points of all Bonbon, for many of the world's problems would disappear if each person showed others love and respect, and that starts with you and me, and others on this website too. What a simple but true message in your little poem. For a little girl I think you have done very well indeed. Sometimes things seem so simple through the eyes of a child. I really think you deserve top marks. | Love - (Josie's Challenge)
Written by Katanga (804 comments posted) 15th April 2008 | Superb - elegant and forceful! I agree with what Josie says about your 'simple but true message'. Often there is, in simplicity, far greater profundity and depth of spirit than in more complicated 'clever-clever' writing which is too ambitious and can be 'trying to show off'.
Anyway. great stuff Bonbon, and I look forward to seeing more of your work on this site.  |
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