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| A New Beginning | |
| By WeeAnn | ||||||||||
| 15 April 2008 | ||||||||||
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Someone asked me if I could write a Science Fiction story. I thought not. Then I tried. What do you reckon?
Markil was outside. It was early spring and the grass had begun to grow on the flat ground close to the Habitation. He was spending more time outside these days. It was still frowned upon of course, but he enjoyed it. It was all very well to say there was no need for people to go outside, to say that the machines had everything in hand, and could be controlled without risking one’s life by leaving the Habitation.
How long ago was it that the pollution had begun to clear? His great grandfather Tordil, had been outside and survived, and he had died a natural death several years ago.
Markil had not long returned to the family enclave after several years in education. He had been fascinated by the historic component. Learning about the time before pollution had forced the people inside. There had been visuals of trees and hills, and water that appeared to have occurred spontaneously; landscapes with wide and varied aspects!
There had even been some which Markil was not sure were real, with copious amounts of water, moving and roiling as if having taken on a life of its own. There had been visuals of enclaves too, but they were odd looking and made from strange looking materials.
Markil had asked to be placed in agriculture for his employment, which had rather surprised his family as both his father and mother were in health and wellbeing. His friends on the other hand were not at all surprised especially not his chosen consort, Trina.
Trina was aware that Tordil’s tales had become Markil’s dreams, dreams of moving outside permanently. They were agreed on this. Trina hadn’t thought much about outside as she was growing up, but having met Markil while at education, and feeling very strong regard for him, she had been easily persuaded that it was her dream too.
Markil wanted to be sure that he knew all he could learn about the care and breeding of animals and the growing of crops. He had read all he could find, and asked to be called if anything different or unusual happened with the animals. Trina thought she would be best to study health and wellbeing. They had discussed setting up their own enclave, but this would not be possible any time soon.
Family accommodation was at a premium. Enclaves hard to acquire, and when one did become available it would need much refurbishment to make it acceptable to a newly united pair. The only other alternative would be to share a family enclave with one or other set of parents. This did not appeal greatly to the young couple.
Markil’s parents already had Markil’s elder brother Cordot and his chosen one living in their enclave with their son, and Trina’s father had in recent years ‘re-chosen’ after the accidental death of her mother and had started a new family.
Markil was early. He waited patiently until Trina joined him, just breathing in the fresh outside air. They greeted each other in the normal way of chosen consorts, covering each other’s ears with their hands, and touching foreheads, and then holding hands, they walked towards the nearby hills.
They had been outside together before, but this time, Markil wanted to show Trina what he had found and he had brought bread and fruit and water, so they could stay outside for a longer period than previously.
They reached the hills and, started to climb. There were trees and short grass on the lower slopes and the climb was easy. When they had been climbing for about an hour, large rocky outcrops started occurring and travelling became more difficult. Markil suggested that they rest for a spell and drink some of the water he had brought and eat some fruit.
Trina sealed the water container and returned it to the carrier bag, into which Markil had already placed the leftovers of the fruit they had eaten and stood up.
Trina ran forward and begun to climb the steps leading up to the upper area. Markil caught her around the waist and swung her up. She scrambled to her feet and explored the room, already imagining how she could place things and make it look like a real enclave. Markil placed his hands on the upper surface and jumped up, joining Trina. He placed his hands over her ears, and touched her forehead gently with his.
“Do you really like it? You must tell me if you don’t!” He looked into her eyes, and there he saw her answer.
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