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THE FATAL SHOT

Propeller spinning
Water churning
Canons blazing
Machine guns rattling
My washing machine is doing well

Colours running
Garments brushing
Spinners humming
Waters rushing
Pumps pulsating

Just one poof.....
The sounds are all gone
Yes, unexpectedly
My washing machine has met its end!
My day of sunshine was terminated
All my joys of housework have gone!
8^th Nov 2005 ;-(

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The Fatal Shot
Written by RDLarson (10 comments posted) 26th January 2006

Cheery and cheeky. Easy to read and entertaining. Well said. I think the only thing worse than the washer breaking is having the car break.
Title is terrific.

Fatal Attractions
Written by Rattle_Spear (93 comments posted) 27th January 2006

Thanks for your objective views.....
Yes, when a car breaks down in Africa - You are really stranded. :grin

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