This is something I wrote a while back but I have revised it to fit 100 words or under.
I lived alone. Then Magda appeared. Her cold, green eyes look into me.
She has been watching me: she has selected me. She sleeks past into
my house. I fetch food which she devours. She sleeps. Night comes and
she leaves, returning the next morning.
That is how it is. I have what she requires: abject devotion.
She knows I long to touch, caress her. But she scorns me.
So I must only look on, as I do now, as she prepares herself
for the night. She ties back her black hair then leaves without a glance.
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Written by Veronica_Milvus (637 comments posted) 16th April 2008 |
| well, that is interesting! My mind went through the interpretations: girl / cat / girl while reading this. Will there be more about this enigmatic relationship? |
Written by TwistedTales (548 comments posted) 16th April 2008 |
This reminded me of Leopold Von Sacher-Masoch's Venus of Furs - a sadomasochistic tale. I think you should flesh this out...it has a potential to be a lot more than 100 words. Regards, TT |
Superbly Sinister! Written by Katanga (1229 comments posted) 5th May 2008 |
Tantalisising stuff, Ed! I shall now move rapidly on to Magda 2. Cheers! John |
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