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Event (Chapter 4 - [9am] Two days before the event)
By JasonVSKa
11 November 2005

This is the first chapter which Christian discover something. The begining of a small mystery which ended in a near death situation.


Christian is standing in hospital ward and sees a sleeping patient lying in bed far away from her, many people was walked past or ignoring the patient. Her dream ended when she wakes up, she looked at her alarm clock and realizes she didn't switch her alarm on last night and that she has overslept. Her back pain and swollen ankle hasn't improved. In the kitchen she found another red envelope on the table. The sky is cloudy and the weather is windy. Christian wearing a long coat enters an Internet shop. She looked around and notices she is the oldest person in the shop. She sat in the same computer Caroline used 3 months ago. She inserted the CD from her handbag into the CD drive. She waited for it to load and a folder icon appeared. She clicks on it and it asked for a password. She was curious and for an hour she tried to unlock it. She was disappointed in herself for not able to open it and for giving up. She takes the CD out of the CD drive, held it near her face and looked at it. She looked at the handwritten and realizes it was the only word she has not tried as password. For the last time she entering the password and press enter. She was delighted to unlock the folder that she giggled. Some people looked at her in a strange way before returning to their screen. Two image icons appeared in the screen and she clicked on each one.  The first image had young Caroliine, Christian and her ex-lover standing outside a cinema. The second image showed Caroline kissing a brunette in her 40s both inside a red car at a car park taken at daylight. Christian wasn't pleased with the image that her heartbeat and blood pressure increase, but she notices and calms down. She prints the image and pays the counter assistant before leaving the shop. She stood near the front door and notices outside was much windier and the sky much cloudier. The weather started to shower and she sees Samuel inside the Chinese restaurant reading a newspaper near the window. She enters the restaurant and notice classical music is being played. She walks to his table and asked, "Hello Samuel. Can you do something for me?" Samuel was surprise by her sudden present he jumped. He closes the newspaper and answered, "What is it?" Christian gives one of the printed photos to him and said, "Can you find the women kissing my daughter?" Samuel looked at the photo and asked, "May I know why?" Christian answered, "Because my daughter is a Christian like me." Samuel asked, "It won't change anything if she's a lesbian?" Christian answered, "True. But at least I know." Samuel sighs and said, "Fine." Christian smiles and said, "Thank you." Samuel asked, "Where did you find this photo?" Christian answered, "From a CD that I found in a chest." Christian sat down on the chair and a waiter walks to the table. The waiter asked, "Hello, would you like to place an order?" Christian answered, "No thank you." The waiter leaves and she asked, "Did you find out who the red enveloped belong to?"  Samuel stopped drinking his tea and answered, "I'm afraid not." He paused and added, "What are you going to do with the two thousand pound? Christian paused and answered, "Give in to tsunami relief and cancer research." Samuel asked, "How are you going to donate it?" Christian answered, "By online." Suddenly his mobile starts beeping and vibrating from his pocket and he switched it off.  "My break time is nearly over. Do you need a lift?" Christian is waving goodbye to a silver car until it was gone. She turns around and a phone shop appears in front of her, she enters it. An assistant walks towards her and asked, "Can I help you madam?" Christian takes out a mobile phone in her handbag and reply, "I need a charger for this mobile?" Later on she goes a nearby internet shop before going home. That night Christian is inside her bathroom, she sees reddish urine in the loo. She sighs and flushes it. Suddenly a phone starts ringing and she calmly walked to the sitting room. She picked up the phone and said, "Hello." Samuel reply, "Good evening Christian. How are you?" Christian answered, "Same and you?" Samuel answered, "Fine thank you. Did you donate the money online?" Christian answered, "Yes I did." Samuel pauses and said, "I couldn't find the woman detail you wanted." She sighs and Samuel added, "But I did find the detail of the car owner address." He added, "It belongs to Jackie!"

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