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Moi
By lavida
18 April 2008

I tried to jot a few lines describing me.. I thought this could be a good first piece!

Penning down words As I look within
Only to search for the true meaning
The complexity of contradictions
Yet the ethereal sense of direction
The desire for yet another mile
With the weapon of the smile
When music bears the beat
The lyrics are my feet
Beckoning the positive side
Is what gets makes me ride
Never settle for what’s given
Always love that crazy vision
And as I glide on life until the bend
I enjoy the odds .. cause I only get even!

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Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 18th April 2008
I think your formatting has been lost, lavida. It's all in one line. 
 
Mia :)

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