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Overview - or Over You?
By Bagheera
18 April 2008
I've found a real challenge for a windbag like me - writing something to a limit of MAX. 300 words!

Anyone with a good idea and a few minutes to spare, the competition closes soon - There's a link elsewhere

Overview – or Over You?

 

 

Orwell may have been very close to the truth. According to one recent  set of statistics, 1984 is the approximate number of times an innocent citizen walking through London can expect to be captured on CCTV film during the course of a single day………..

"We have the technology …." is no longer the strapline spoken during the intro to every episode of a science-fantasy TV series. As far as medical advances of the last decade are concerned, it is fast becoming the literal truth. But does this make us a  "better" species? And if so, by whose criteria?

Spare part surgery was unthinkable when Mary Shelley wrote about Dr. Frankenstein and his 'monster'. Now there is serious ethical debate about 'growing' spare parts – arms, legs, even organs – from "stem cells" which can be tweaked and modified ad infinitum until the required result is achieved.

To alter, enhance or 'improve' on a given human being simply "because we can" leads us into a dangerous moral minefield. If, for example, Steven Hawkins had all the motor skills of the 'average' person, would he have spent as much time thinking? How would Beethoven's music have sounded, were it not for his profound deafness? And on a personal note: every piano tuner I have ever met has been blind …… 

I won't say that "Big Brother" is already in control of a significant proportion of our everyday lives: but CCTV is being used ever more widely, The question remains:

     "Quis custode, ipso custodes?" – "Who guards the Guardians themselves?"

 

 

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Written by TwistedTales (548 comments posted) 18th April 2008
Ok firstly, you've managed to pack a lot of thought provoking points in your piece. It gets one thinking and that is something terrific to achieve as a writer. I liked it.  
 
And secondly, "where's the link for the competition you talk about in your intro"..:) lemme know. 
 
 
 

Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 19th April 2008
I found this interesting. A couple of things threw me though.  
 
1. Expression, "literal truth" - it seemed to get in the way of the flow. It could be a personal thing - I tend to ask, is there an "illiteral" truth? 
 
2. If the piece is about 'Who guards the Guardians?", then para 4 about Hawkins and Beethoven sounds a little off the theme for me. I found the paragraph perceptive, but perhaps it needs a little something at the end, a question etc, that fixing all human ills can be a profound disservice. Again it might just be me. 
 
But on the whole, very interesting. I hope you will flesh it out for all of us when you have time. 
 
Mia 8)

Written by Phil (7014 comments posted) 21st April 2008
Crikey - you've packed so much into this. I'm usually all for brevity - but in this case the issues are so big, I think that they deserve a much more thorough examination - chapters possibly! Unusual and interest idea about Hawkins - with a working body would he have been such a genius? Hard to say - though I wonder what he would prefer. 
 
Who guards the guardians? Unfortunately, they seem to guard themselves. 
 
This got me thinking. There's another 10 000 words somewhere here. :eek  
 
Phil

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