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| Smithereens | |
| By alandavidpritchard | ||||||
| 20 April 2008 | ||||||
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The explosion was spectacular: a pyrotechnic delight for those who lived afar, and for us too, in that flash of exuberant abandon, momentarily dazzled, basking in the disbelief that something could be that bright. Sparks to rival stars - my God it was as if a fireworks factory had finally found the arsonist’s flame, and once the fuse was lit
all of fate could Man, it was fucking beautiful!
rocketed by intense fuels into some far-off, new-found fabulous place, like out of space where only we matter and where truth is, foolishly believing we might be only slightly singed along the way. Problem was, and the truth of the matter is, “destroyed” is too tame to describe what we did, that night we detonated all our desires at once – the orgasmic pyroclastic decimation of our former selves. We thought we would be fused together in one fabulous flight of physics, as substantial as the sun … instead we found the heat too searing, too scorching, too intense ...
and we exploded and vaporised.
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