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By owlhoot
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21 April 2008 |
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How can I tame a wild mustang?
By riding out the storm of arrogant fury
as the staccato rhythm of hoofbeats bang
across the embroidered cells of my memory?
Or should I try with gentleness and kindness
to bend the impish will of one truly wild
to match my own more solid likeness
and change an arrogant spirit from angry to mild?
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Written by Steve_K (58 comments posted) 20th April 2008 | I enjoyed this piece owlhoot. You captured the feelings of this poem well in:
"Or should I try with gentleness and kindness
to bend the impish will of one truly wild.."
I think that using "...bend the impish will..." really worked well. Kudos
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Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 20th April 2008 | I really like this. The wild, the fury and the arrogant spirit sounds glorious. Tame it? Can you tame such a beast without marring its beauty? Don't know... I'm not sure if you are talking about a mustang either... Hmmm...
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Written by owlhoot (17 comments posted) 21st April 2008 | Quote:
Don't know... I'm not sure if you are talking about a mustang either... Hmmm...
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