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My precious friend
By Nance
21 April 2008
Dedicated to all my faithfull friends - either close to me, or far from me, but only the true ones who make every day brighter - either by a soft word, or by a vivid letter. Josie, thank you for your special friendship, interest and support.

My precious friend,
How come you’re gone?
There’s nothing I can do.
You left for good,
And I retreat,
I feel like going blue.


Today – my day,
But you’re away,
Unconscious of the sun.
Instead of you
It shines on me,
And I begin to run


To share some joy.
Don’t frown on me
When I have found you there.
Beyond my wish,
Despite the pain
I do, I always care.

2008

Reviews

Written by Josie (2786 comments posted) 21st April 2008
Hello Anne - this friend hasn't gone. I am sorry if you have lost a good friend because they are very valuable.. Your poem ws so sad. I hope things get better for I'm sure your friends value your kindness and friendship.
Huge thanks
Written by Nance (86 comments posted) 21st April 2008
Thanks, Josie. Although the poem is sad, I never lose my faith in friendship and I ever have confidence in you, in particular.

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