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By PeterFW
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23 April 2008 |
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Unloved
Unaware
Unsure of it all
Afraid to step out
In case of a fall
Untidy
Unclean
Unable to tell
If the adult in me
Will come out of its shell
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Written by mia_ms_kim (993 comments posted) 24th April 2008 | Vulnerable in its simplicity, evokes compassion in the reader. This is something most people can relate to at some level. But I have a feeling it is not the adult, but the child in the adult, who has to be drawn out of the shell with gentleness, love and compassion. A touching piece. Mia |
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