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By no1butClo
23 April 2008
Lets get caught in the rain, when
British Summer Time is at its best.
With you I'd watch each purple
clouded twilight darken and burst.

I want to share the taste
of a raindrop's journey
through the sultry air, by telling you
or with a kiss. So that, perhaps,

when our summer ended, you'll have
something to remember, in the cold.

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Written by patterjack (1095 comments posted) 23rd April 2008
... is the fresh young clo of the past ! 
 
I want to share the taste  
of a raindrop's journey  
through the sultry air
 
 
Is a great piece in the expression of an emotion. 
 
patterjack 
 

Written by gutterkitty (362 comments posted) 27th April 2008
Agree, this is great in its simple sweetness. Nice to see you again :)

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