He had seen how the gate was built out of stone and cedar. He had seen the blue glazed tiles and the golden lions. It was an honorable monument to Ishtar, goddess of Babylon, goddess of Ur and Akkad. She who held the secret of life ever lasting...
He knew it would not stand forever, for he had seen them in his dreams. Chariots and hooves shook the earth of the Land between the Streams. He had felt it tremble and awoke with tears on his face. His wives were around him and tried to comfort him, but he could not stop weeping, for he had seen the wrath of the gods and men alike.
He heard the sandals of the Assyrians and the screams of women. The city was destroyed and the rubble thrown into the southern sea. Ishtar's tears flooded the Tigris and Eufrates.
" This was only the beginning", her voice had told him. And he had seen how the river dried up and the city burned, again and again. One invader after the other came and each of them excelled in destruction.
Bearded men with curved bows, half naked ones with iron helmets, men from the deserts on white horses and men from the plains with camels and sturdy ponies, but the further into the future he glanced, the more fearsome they appeared.
The last ones he had seen before his wives had woken him were a grasshopper with iron wings and dragon that breathed fire. Warriors were riding roaring lions and of Babylon was left naught but ashes. The skies were red and he saw how people turned to dust.
" Wake up", they said, "It's only a dream", but in the distance he heard the voice of Ishtar and it talked about oil...
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Written by mia_ms_kim (1019 comments posted) 24th April 2008 |
I loved this, Fledermaus. What a way to talk about Iraq's history + potential future (I assume this is what it is???). And the grasshopper with iron wings and dragon that breathed fire must be the modern weaponry, hellicopter, tank etc. Perhaps you are also talking about nuclear explosion? I love this sort of genre (ancient mystery bordering on fantasy but grounded on modern reality). I thought you captured the voice and the psyche of the ancient king very well. They were supposedly divine and had deep connection to their national gods. The prophetic dream, the many wives, the voice of the goddess, and the gate as the symbol of Babylon's glory and pride and finally its destruction - fantastic. I wonder if there is another way you could explain oil. Back in those days, they didn't have oil as we know it now. Perhaps the king could see a vision of slimy black liquid from deep within the earth as being the source of all that violence and destruction, and he is totally lost in the future mysteries... Anyway I thought it was brilliant. Mia |
Written by Fledermaus (3301 comments posted) 24th April 2008 |
Thanks Mia, Yes it's about Iraq, as I read the US army built a helipad on the ruins of Babylon and its tanks ruined the Ishtar gate and several millennia old mosaics. Somehow I do think their place in the history of that country will not be very different from that of the Assyrians, Alexander the Great or the Mongols. Seems the 'cradle of civilization' is not a very healthy place...
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Written by TwistedTales (548 comments posted) 25th April 2008 |
With Mia. I loved your piece on parting with Holland...this one's right up there as well...few words...but yet so sad and impactful...one could almost see the ruins and the invaders approaching...beautiful... Regards, TT |
Written by Fledermaus (3301 comments posted) 25th April 2008 |
Thanks TT. That other piece wasn't about parting with Holland, just parting with Leiden :-) I'm glad this worked.
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Written by TwistedTales (548 comments posted) 25th April 2008 |
The Town of Keys? Is it? |
Hi Fledermaus Written by beatricelouise (215 comments posted) 25th April 2008 |
Like Mia, I found this to be so impressive. I actually never got it to be honest. Thanks Mia for bringing out the hidden meaning. You'te so intelligent. This genre is definitely not my forte. But I guess if I had read it more than once, I would have understood. Just too tired to get much of anything lately. |
Written by Fledermaus (3301 comments posted) 25th April 2008 |
| Thanks beatricelouise. It was a bit of an experiment. Somehow predictions of future events are usually explained in terms of what people know. The Aztecs for instance are said to have referred to the sails of the spanish ships as 'clouds' and some Native Americans are said to have referred to the Europeans as 'stags with human faces' (men on horseback). And it's also said that Nostradamus may have meant armored vehicles when he mentioned 'great beasts'. I tried to make this sound a bit biblical. |
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