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| Beautiful Day | |
| By MyCatIsMyIdol | ||
| 23 April 2008 | ||
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A nice spring day but is there something sinister lurking? My first shot at poetry.  I've now sorted the stanzas to the way they should be. The text box does some funny things.From beneath the ribbons of cloud, rays of light glided down casting brilliant showers of gold, bronze and brass. Silently… The chorus of birds rang through the soft air sweet from the daffodils swaying gently to the melody. She stood below… The silver branches of the tree outstretched like a bird’s wings woven in the leaves and the pure white blossoms. A knife in her hand… A cloak of emerald grass swept down to a trickling stream as the dragonflies skimmed down the water’s edge. Splashes of vivid red on her clothes … A rabbit bounded through the grass -sunlight shining off its silk coat- paused and twitched its ears so daintily. “This was a romantic picnic! Why did you have to ruin it by squirting ketchup all over me?”
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