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| By Katanga | ||||||||
| 24 April 2008 | ||||||||
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This one just popped into my head and off the paper tonight . . . Inspired by Fellpony, Josie and Roald Dahl - an unholy mix if ever there was one (no offence!). I guess it's aimed at the 'intelligent seven-year-old' - sweet at the the beginning, and challenging at the end. Any thoughts welcome! Tell you what - it's a great relief for me to get away from the adult poetry section occasionally to write something relatively free from angst, for children. . . (smiley) Yo! All the best to all of you -John. X
Muddle Puddle Pie
Have you ever eatenMuddle Puddle Pie? If not, I really think you should - Here are some reasons why: It isn't full of lentils And yucky things like that In fact it's full of chocolate And none of it's low-fat. It's fantastic - full of beetles And things that creep and crawl I tell you they're delicious - You can chew and munch them all! They wiggle about in front of you As you sit down to eat And they ask you to just crunch them Like any old mincemeat. But spare a thought for those below Who wriggle in their seats How on Earth are they to know That you're sitting down . . . To eat?
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I absolutely loved it! It is the exact kind of thing that would have made me giggle as a child. I would make girls go YUCK! boys go COOL! all round a good poem. 
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