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Bl##dy Weather!
By Mr_E_Writer
24 April 2008

It never rains but it...


Hail-Stones
Hail Gingerwine
Hail summertime
Hail Julius Caeser.
Hail do you do
When weather is scary?
Say three hail-Marys
Hail Double-Diamond geezer.

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Hmmm
Written by PuppyWuppy (29 comments posted) 24th April 2008
very interesting, but I don't really get it. That is not your fault, but mine, because poetry really ain't my forte. Perharps you could explain it?

Written by Mr_E_Writer (187 comments posted) 24th April 2008
Mr Weather is a creature of extremes, one moment brilliant sunshine and the next hail stones. 
Much the same as the hardened drinker who can change from Stones gingerwine to Double Diamond at the drop of a hat. 
Caeser, of course, was a follower of baccus and the grapevine blossoms in summertime. 
Grapevines, aren't they wonderful things?
I GET IT!
Written by PuppyWuppy (29 comments posted) 24th April 2008
Now I understand I think it is genius! :grin

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 25th April 2008
Any port in a storm - and the weather around here is likely to drive you to it. 
 
Liked this. 
 
Phil

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