Oh lovely Leiden,
How it aches me that we should part. I have only known you for such a short time, but in those few months I have fallen in love with your canals and your narrow alleys, your stately buildings and your friendly atmosphere.
Allow me to daydream, for what would you be like if you were personified? The Dutch are too down-to-earth for such things, but while you are so typically Dutch, you radiate romance.
I imagine you as a student, a stereotypical Leiden student; a bit haughty and snobbish, very outspoken, but also elegant and feminine. You are not like the tomboyish women I usually fall for; I keep that image for that other town.
You are Cambridge, I was Oxford, or the other way around. I was sceptical when I first met you, thought you aloof and clumsy but then I got to know you and I noticed that beneath those silk scarves and this expensive coat, there was a woman of great depth. You spoke the queen's Dutch and dressed like a lady rather than a girl in her twenties, but when we sat down along the canal and listened to the barrel-organ, I got to know you better.
You weren't materialistic, just well groomed and a bit posh. You told me of thousands of years of memories including those of my parents. You showed me where they had lived and I envied them.
We walked over the bridges and past the old greenhouses of the centuries old botanical garden. You showed me the windmills and the quays where the Pilgrim fathers left for America, the many museums and the birthplace of Rembrant. And at your heart, the hidden fortress. It was only a circular wall on an artificial mound, but you had chosen its location well.
There we lay in the grass and laughed. I stroked your hair and felt so quiet. You seemed so much warmer than anyone I had ever met before. I felt home with you. You were still so young and sparkling in spite of your thousands of years. So optimistic and bright.
But now I have to leave you, Town of Keys. You will always be the most beautiful town of Holland.
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Written by TwistedTales (548 comments posted) 25th April 2008 |
Lyrical and dreamy. I knew it wasn't a person you spoke of, but yet tripped quite a few times and gained consciousness at the end yet again. Felt sad on behalf of the writer separating from a place he fell in love with..though i have never been to Holland myself...so a great piece. Regards, TT |
Written by Fledermaus (3301 comments posted) 25th April 2008 |
Thank you TT. Yes, it's a lovely town. I haven't lived there, but I went to the uni there last year and since I had first studied somewhere else, I had my prejudices, but the place is lovely. |
Written by Asferthecat (834 comments posted) 25th April 2008 |
I like the way you have compared the town to a woman, very well done. I got in a bit of a muddle between cays and keys and quays. I had assumed that by cays you meant quays, but when I looked it up in the dictionary I saw that a cay means a small, low island. When you say Town of Keys at the end, is that refering to the cays, or something I must have missed? Still at university? You write in such a mature way, I had assumed you were older. |
Written by mia_ms_kim (1019 comments posted) 26th April 2008 |
I've only come across in-depth personification of cities in the Bible, eg. Jerusalem = bride, wife etc. To you, Leiden = old flame? I found it intriguing. Some biblical writers convince me that they are truly in love with Jerusalem like man is with a woman. I've always wondered... I can't imagine it. Do you really feel like that towards Leiden, a part of you is so in love with the place, the city seems to take on a human persona? It reads very much like it... Mia |
Written by Fledermaus (3301 comments posted) 26th April 2008 |
Thanks Asferthecat and Mia. Asferthecat - Thanks for poinying that out. I corrected it. 'cays' had to be 'quays'. The keys were correct, as that's the nickname of Leiden. I've been studying a bit too long. Result: A lot of degrees, but no money ;-) But that's going to change soon, hence I'll have to miss this town. Mia - I absolutely love that town. It's an old town and a bit of a miniature of Amsterdam, but much more quiet. My parents have studied there too, hence I mention the 'memories' the town has of them.. And how much I envy them. For students it's probably the greatest place to be, but Leiden students do have a bit of a snobbish reputation (I first studied elsewhere, hence the remarks). |
Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 3rd May 2008 |
Liked this, Fledermaus. It has an easy lyricism to it that gently pulls the reader through. Phil |
Lovely Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 3rd May 2008 |
| Fledermaus - How I enjoyed this. How unusual! I think I will have to come and visit such a beautiful town. I have been to Holland but such a long time ago I think I must come again. Well done. This was really good writing. |
Written by Fledermaus (3301 comments posted) 3rd May 2008 |
Thanks Phil and Josie, Oh yes, I think Leiden is certainly worth a visit. It's not big or spectacular, but just a nice and pretty old town with a lot of history.  |
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