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| A New Beginning Chapter 2 | |
| By WeeAnn | ||
| 25 April 2008 | ||
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father was apprehensive.
Trina appealed to her stepmother, Asta, with a look.
slipping her hand into his and squeezing it. be sure.” “We will discuss it with the Assembly of Councillors, of course.” Said Markil. I have already spoken to Councillor Dant. He asked about access to water and we have found a good supply, which will be easily piped to where we want it, I think that will please him, and as soon as we let him know we have spoken to you and to my father, he will call the Assembly together. They may send someone out to view the area before giving us Council endorsement. We will not do anything surreptitiously, and I would never put Trina in
peril.” Markil had told his brother what he had found, and that he was showing it to Trina. Cordot met them as they arrived at the family enclave, and one look at the pair told him that all
had gone well. like.” Cordot grasped his brother by both hands and then Trina in formal greeting. The trio moved to the communal area where the rest of the family were each occupied with separate tasks. The boys’ father was sitting at a table, documents spread about him as he wrestled with the figures of his monthly accounts. Their mother was preparing a meal, while Cordot’s consort Matil was teaching their son his letters, in preparation for his formal schooling to begin when he reached his third birthday. “I am pleased you are all here,” said Markil, taking Trina’s hand in his. “Trina and I have made our decision. We will approach the Assembly of Councillors and seek endorsement
to live outside The Habitation.” The meeting with the Assembly of Councillors went as well as could be hoped for. It was an open forum, and as well as both families of the couple, many friends had turned up to give support. Having brought the meeting to order, Councillor Dant addressed Trina first. He wanted to be sure that she was not being coerced into doing something she was unsure about.
Having established this, he asked many questions of Markil, about the suitability of the site, ease of access, water, drainage, the probability of supplying themselves with food. them indefinitely. Markil had investigated the land around the area close to the proposed new enclave, and had decided that there was an area suitable for pasture, as well as for growing crops. Markil made a promise to the Assembly, that all goods supplied to them would be repaid in full, and when that was done, they would be in a position to help with the provisioning of The Habitation. This announcement went down very well with the assembled community and the councillors would have found it hard not to find in favour of the proposal, but not to make it sound too easy for the pair, Councillor Dant told them that the Assembly would make a decision only after an inspection of the proposed site. This would take place three days hence, and Markil must make himself available to guide the deputation of councillors. When the meeting was over, Markil and Trina repaired to a nearby Teahouse with Cordot and Matil, (their son, Umas, was happy to return to the family enclave with his grandparents). They armed themselves with writing materials, and proceeded to compile two lists. The first one was what they could reasonably ask the community to provide, which included large items like a transportable power supply, a communication station and a selection of animals, seeds and tools, the other, what they would need besides the first list. Much hilarity was enjoyed as the four were joined by friends, who helped (and/or hindered) with the compiling of the lists. Items were moved from one list to the other, or removed altogether from both lists, as Joining Gifts were pledged. Markil was much more businesslike next day when he turned up at the appointed time to accompany the Councillors The inspection went well, as Markil explained to the Councillors what he intended to do and how he proposed to use the land. He showed them his water source, and his projected drainage line. The inspection party returned to the Chamber of Councillors and Markil was asked to wait outside while the report was made. Markil felt he was being kept waiting for a very long time, but eventually he was called inside and was asked if he could inform the councillors of what would be required of the community. He breathed a sigh of relief, and produced his list. Although there was some small demur, Markil realised by the looks that passed between the Councillors, that the list was shorter than they had been expecting and was accepted in full. The Joining Day was all that the young pair could have asked for. Everyone had new clothes for the occasion. Corvan and Asta provided a fine repast, and everyone enjoyed the music and dancing. As the celebrations drew to a close, a wheeled vehicle was brought to the exit of the Habitation, and everything that had not already been delivered to the new enclave was loaded aboard for the journey. Several of Markil’s and Trina’s friends were to accompany the newly joined pair, as the wheeled vehicle could only go so far, then the goods, mostly
foodstuffs and personal items, would need to be carried up the rest of the way. The vehicle would then be returned to where it belonged. Alone at last, Trina and Markil surveyed their kingdom. They had spent the last few weeks coming back and forth, bringing furniture and furnishings, utensils and animals and seeds and tools. While Trina helped by her stepmother and two of her friends, Nada and Miima had placed furniture and draped curtaining; Markil in the company of his brother and
best friend Norno had built fences and sheds and made a start on tilling the land. There was still a lot to do, but they had all the time in the world to do it.
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