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| I always choose you first | |
| By lauthiamkok | ||||||||
| 26 April 2008 | ||||||||
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Any grammar errors please do let me know many thanks or just a criticism is always warmly welcomed :-) I always choose you first However you are in my life no more I will still always choose (you) The eyes that see me like you did So that I will never stop Seeing you. I always choose you first However we see each no more I will still always choose (you) The heart that knows me like you did So that I will never stop Knowing you. I always choose you first However we know each other no more I will still always choose (you) The voice that talks to me like you did So that I will never stop, never stop Hearing you.
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