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| Falling | |
| By x-Dreams-In-Crimson-x | ||||||
| 19 November 2005 | ||||||
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Basically, this poem is about how it feels when you're with someone, and it feels too good to be true. No one wants that kind of moment to end. I'm sure some of you will know what I mean. Sit over here, Let's pick at the scabs, From the time our wounds wouldn't heal. Look in my eyes, Does my hurt still remain, From the time we both realized, We're falling away from, Falling so far from, Sanity? Lie here with me, Take hold of my hand, Like you did when I felt so lost. Does the ache still remain, From the time we both realized, We're falling away from, Falling so far from, Reality? Can you feel the drop? This is how we stumble, Crawl, Into the arms of a nightmare, Hold on to me tight, Don't want my dream to end. I'll remind myself, Never to wake up, When you disappear.
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