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| By Emmuttmax | ||||
| 26 April 2008 | ||||
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I understand the poetry section is where the sharks lurk. Here is some fresh bait for the frenzy. I must state upfront--although it will become evident after you read the poem--I am not a poet. I wrote this at the request of a friend in Russia. She is a professor of linguistics and asked me to write something for her English class. Thanks for your indulgence.
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Fingers hovering over electric parchment, I gently grab the reins. Bright, eager adverbs burst forward into the frosty night. Nostrils flaring, moist excitement billows as we chase down your quixotic, rust-colored verb. Inward move my smoke eyes, Searching the canyon floor for the glow of perfect adjectives, Dulcet, strong, cozy adjectives to embrace your hungry noun. We move away on cats’ paws and recline in heavy comfort on sultans’ pillows Finger on finger Thought to thought Childlike conjunctions and prepositions swirl and dance before the fireplace Giggling, happy. The window frames the purple night, dotted with ellipsis shining their street lights on ring-tailed commas hung in the forlorn elm trees. Our world momentarily cocooned in a parenthetical phrase Safe, languid. Words take their leave through the front door Exhausted Leaving pictures behind And we wait for the paragraph’s completeness. The last period.
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