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By patterjack
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26 April 2008 |
A sort of emendation
Second thoughts
Perhaps if I had but thought twice
it is here that I would have placed Advice....
but my better self I did not consult
and it's there in For Kids as a result . |
nah
Written by patterjack (1435 comments posted) 26th April 2008 | can't be bothered -- I'll leave 'em both alone
patterjack |
Written by Veronica_Milvus (769 comments posted) 26th April 2008 | | I would move it! It is too good to miss. |
Written by NathanRoberts (277 comments posted) 27th April 2008 | | Very clever, not just a little ad for your other piece, but a self contained poem with a point. Adults giving advice: much scarier than either gender of big cat... |
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