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By Nick
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26 April 2008 |
Mmm just a short one - any comments welcome.
If easily offended, please avoid!!
Take a trip to the Devil’s Disneyland. Everything is free as long as you leave your soul at the door (no promises that you’ll get it back!!) . We have the best brothels, drug dens, strippers, alcohol, shooting ranges (with live targets), killing rooms, and just about anything you can think of. Drug-vending machines on every corner, every type of hooker – ask about our specials on the young ones.
If it’s against god’s decree’s then you'll find it here.
Depravity is our aim, do anything your twisted black heart can think of. Stab someone, shoot them, use medieval devices on them , hell you can tie them up and fuck em' if you want to. It will only cost you your soul and we here at Devil's Disneyland never judge. As an additional bonus if you come up with a new perverted, dark and torturous game and we like it, we will pay you mega bucks to have it as a standard attraction.
Don't delay – Sin today........|
Written by TwistedTales (548 comments posted) 26th April 2008 | Alright Nick, here's the deal man...what if I come up a with a badass game...can I get my soul back?...where are ma tickets?
TT | hahaha
Written by SplatterpunkShelbs (37 comments posted) 26th April 2008 | I love it. Especially "Don't delay, sin today!"
Sounds like fun.
Good work.  |
Written by mia_ms_kim (1019 comments posted) 27th April 2008 | Well done. Drives the point home. The sad thing is we don't need Devil's Disneyland to showcase the vices listed. "ask about our specials on the young ones." made me want to cry - 'cos many places in the world, that's exactly they are advertised. And yes, I don't see how one can do those things without selling one's soul. typos? drug den’s -> drug dens, shot them -> shoot them, degree’s -> decrees
Mia  | Thanks!
Written by Nick (146 comments posted) 27th April 2008 | Thanks for the comments folks.
Mia - thanks for pointing out my typos/spelling - I have now corrected the errors.
TT - If you can come up with 3 or more fun activities we'll give you a job (still - it won't get your soul back!!)
And of course tickets can be bought from your local government agency!!!!
Nick |
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