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For Brett and Alice
By Katanga
26 April 2008
Sorry Brett! Couldn't resist this at your expense! I hope you won't edit your original work - I think more banter will ensue as it stands.

Alice in the Vale of Clwyd

I meant 'I want to feel alive'
But Life is a poisoned chalice
And C's next to V
As a typewriter key
So I wrote 'I want to feel Alice'.

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Written by fellpony (1569 comments posted) 26th April 2008
It's like that C&W song:  
 
... "living' next door to Alice... " 
 
and the inevitable chorus, "Alice? Who the F*** is Alice?"
Alice and Kicking!
Written by Katanga (1129 comments posted) 26th April 2008
 
I haven't had a sex change, but at my age I'm just glad to be Alice and kicking! 
Cheers! John :grin

Written by Veronica_Milvus (591 comments posted) 26th April 2008
Excellent, Katanga, you have found your Muse, and you know her name. Result!

Written by Phil (6628 comments posted) 27th April 2008
Would Alice be amenable to a quick fondle, do you think? 
 
Liked it. 
 
Phil

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