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For Katanga (with love from Brett and Alice)
By Brett
26 April 2008
Cheers, John. Sadly I have ammended the Vale of Clwyd, it was before I read your post. This is from me in love of dear Alice.

Write your verses day and night
I know you mean no malice
For this poet simply blundered
Then plundered the vale of Alice

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How Jolly!
Written by Katanga (724 comments posted) 26th April 2008
How jolly (and) kind of you to reply with such a good ditty! 
 
A shame in a way it's been 'corrected', but I respect your decision! 
 
In the first flush of love with this excellent forum, I am indeed writing day and night - it's now getting on for 2.00 a.m. Yawn! 
 
I just hope I don't burn out too soon. Not that I'm remotely a star, but the idea of 'burning out' reminds me of the powerfully sad Bad Company song 'Shooting Star' about a young rock guitarist who dies an untimely death due to drink and drugs - do you know it? 
 
How about amending 'ammended' to 'amended'? 
 
Ha! Ha! I weep once more! ;)  
 
Just going to turn my attention to your 'Hooves'. 
 
Cheers! John

Written by Brett (482 comments posted) 26th April 2008
Hi John. Yes, Shooting Star, a classic. 
 
One thing I shall have to amend is my ways - I knew I was seeing double last night, but it appears I was typing double aswell! 
 
Cheers.

Written by Phil (6393 comments posted) 27th April 2008
It seems like is a very amenable girl. Plundered indeed. 
 
Phil

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